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Academic Presentation #3: Design Slides People Can Read

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Design Slides People Can Read

Let the slide show the evidence while your voice explains why it matters.

LESSON 03 OF 08 · READ + PRACTISE

A slide is a shared view, not a page from your report. People need to look at it and listen at the same time. Give each slide one main purpose. Use a short sentence as the title when it helps state the point.

THE IDEA IN ONE PICTURE

Before and after slide design. Before: topic heading and dense text. After: Design B used less power, with labelled bars: A 10 watts, B 7 watts.BEFORE · a topic and too much textPower resultsAFTER · one message with evidenceDesign B used less power in this testA10 WB7 WInvented example · same test conditions · baseline = 0 W

Swipe across the diagram to see the full picture.

A slide makeover using invented teaching data. The improved slide states one result and shows the comparison that supports it.

Replace a topic with a message

“Temperature results” names a topic. “The wider channel stayed cooler in this test” gives a message. Below the title, show the evidence needed to judge that statement. A photograph may explain a device better than a paragraph. A labelled diagram may explain a process better than a photograph.

Remove work from the reader

Put labels beside the lines or objects they describe. Use strong contrast, generous empty space, and consistent positions for titles and captions. Do not depend on red and green alone: add words, symbols, or different line styles. Explain every symbol that matters. Small citations can be shorter on the slide, but they must remain readable.

Test the real viewing conditions

Read the slide from the back of a room, or ask someone to view your shared screen on a laptop. Can they read axis labels and units? If not, enlarge them or split the slide. There is no font size that works in every room. Avoid shrinking a whole table just to fit it. Show the important rows and keep the full table as backup.

WATCH A REAL EXAMPLE · VISUAL RESEARCH TALK EXCERPT

Let the visual carry the explanation

5 min 19 sec excerpt · 0:16–5:35
Ramesh Raskar · TED · Imaging at a trillion frames per second

This imaging researcher uses photographs and slow-motion visualisations to explain a difficult idea. The full talk is about eleven minutes; this task uses only the opening section.

Watch on YouTube ↗

Use the YouTube link if the player does not load. Turn on English captions in the player settings when available; automatic captions may contain errors.

What to notice

  • 0:16–1:15: Look at how the first image introduces the research idea.
  • 2:50–3:25: Notice how attention is directed to different parts of one visual.
  • 5:03–5:35: Listen for the explanation of how repeated measurements are combined.

Try it: Choose one visual from your own research. Write a sentence title and a 30-second explanation that guides the eye.

Check your viewing task

Name the object or axes first, point out the important feature, then state what it means. Keep secondary details in notes rather than covering the visual with text.

This is a public science talk, not a slide template. Study the visual explanation; you do not need expensive animation. Stop at 5:35 on YouTube.

Video credit: Ramesh Raskar · TED · Imaging at a trillion frames per second. Source and attribution ↗

Your turn · 2-minute practice

You have a slide with six bullet points, a device photo, and two graphs. Its message is “Design B used less power.” What would you keep?

See a model answer or self-check

Keep a clear power comparison and the conditions needed to interpret it. Use a small device image only if it explains the comparison. Move the other information to later or backup slides.

Further reading: Assertion–Evidence slide tutorial.

Explore all eight lessons
  1. Start with One Clear Message
  2. Open Clearly and Guide Your Audience
  3. Design Slides People Can Read · you are here
  4. Explain Graphs and Uncertainty
  5. Explain Methods, Equations, and Limits
  6. Speak Clearly and Use Your Body Well
  7. Handle Questions with Confidence
  8. Rehearse, Finish, and Be Ready

Academic Presentation · Science & Engineering · Original teaching examples. Numerical examples are illustrative, not published research results.

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